Comments for Assignment 3

Student ID

Name

Comments

h8706831

陳章展 *

l         Complex sentence. Dependent clause = (which utilizes the bus
hierarchy with in the advanced microcontroller bus architecture(AMBA) in order to
allow single and multiple high-performance DSP intellectual property cores to be integrated
on the SoC platform.)

l         S+V = platform incorporates

h8803101

郭景銘

Assignment missing

h8803108

高健庭

Assignment missing

h880346n

李慶璋

Assignment missing

h8803820

李育修 *

l         Complex sentence

l         The Soldier Systems Center's fire-resistant uniform initiative involves embedding uniforms with smart inner and outer layers, [with the outer layer moving toward the flame and possibly dispensing a protective foam (while the inner layer keeps heat away from the wearer's body by creating space between the fabric and the skin.) ]

l         Initiative = ?

l         Involve = ?

l         Embedding此處為一動名詞。Embed A with B = B嵌入A

l         Look up wth here, item (11)

l         And links “moving …” and “dispensing …”

h8903002

葉子由 *

l         Sentence analysis is OK.

l         Those of = ?

l         a group of tech-savvy political activists = ?

h8903804

王政陽

Assignment missing

h8906106

吳柏熙

l         V = have organized

l         Are supposed to = ?

l         Specific = ?

h8906110

洪慶瑞

Assignment missing

h9003003a

李紹唐

l         Analysis is OK, but the sentence is not challenging enough.

h9003007a

粘宸皓

Assignment missing

h9003009a

秦壽崙 *

l         Where did get this one? Are you plagiarizing? Click this.

h9003011a

黃怡禎

l         Sentence type = ?

l         Otherwise, the analysis is OK.

h9003019a

施義欽

l         OK

h9003021a

林群興

l         Very good.

l         Make your source a hyperlink.

h9003023a

蔡明勳

l         Practically no analysis.

h9003027a

翁宏銘

l         Very good.

l         Hold != 保持, See item (29) here

l         Which = ?

h9003029a

蕭匡宭

l         Deputy Director-General != 代言人

l         I don’t understand how your analysis goes.

h9003043a

高誌維

l         when it comes = 在…方面

l         “attendees” should appear early in the analysis.

l         Conference = ?

h9003045a

黃淑文

Assignment missing

h9003047a

買大誠

l         Increase” is a noun.

l         Charles McQueary presented

l         Charles McQueary presented a request

l         Charles McQueary presented a request for a increase

l         Charles McQueary presented a request for a annual budget increase

l         Charles McQueary presented a request for a 43 percent annual budget increase

l         Charles McQueary presented a request for a 43 percent annual budget increase to Congress

l         Charles McQueary presented a request for a 43 percent annual budget increase to Congress on April 10.

l         Charles McQueary presented a request for a 43 percent annual budget increase to cover various technology initiatives to Congress on April 10.

h9003049a

郭豐碩

Assignment missing

h9003051a

潘嘉琳

l         You need to analyze the dependent clause separately. What is the verb in the dependent clause?

l         Divert = ?

h9003055a

沈政達 *

l         A recently released study suggests (that instead of sleeping in peace, rats have complex dreams (in which they rehearse the rat race of their everyday life).)

l         S+V = study suggests

l         Did you copy the translation done by others and pass it off as your own? If so, you are plagiarizing.

h9003065a

林志倫

Assignment missing

h9003073a

郭嘉文

Assignment missing

h9003077a

陳嘉祥 *

l         This is a good sentence. It is the combination of the following two sentences: 1) Belkin's Bluetooth AP will get the job done; and 2) it get the job done at almost a third the price of some of its competitors.

l         at a third the price = 價錢只有…的三分之一

h9003085a

尤俊詠

l         Very good.

l         Do you know the difference between “a” leading innovator and “the” leading innovator?

h9003087a

柯厚丞

l         You didn’t ask questions and do partial translations along the way.

l         made it his job != 讓他有工作

l         project = ?

h9003091a

陳昱政 *

l         ultrawideband  != 離心器

l         Other firms are developing devices (based on ultrawideband technology)

h9003093a

周俊宏

l         Analysis is OK, but your sentence is not challenging at all. Get something harder.

h9003095a

吳文強

l         No source.

l         “Alumnae” is plural.

l         S+V = activities include

l         How many items are included? You said “students, faculty and alumnae, achoir performance是屬於一起的”. Not so.

l         As well as = and

h9003097a

黃慕生

l         Your sentence is too simple. Get something harder.

h9003099a

蘇家展

l         Practically no analysis at all.

l         You need to work on your vocabulary really hard.

h9003101a

陳俊翰

Assignment missing

h9003105a

徐于三

l         I am not sure if you copied the sentence, especially the punctuation, correctly.

l         Your verb is wrong. V = asked.

l         Balloon = ?

h9003115a

林上欽

l         Not bad. But “they find” is not S+V.

h9003122a

許佑民

l         Even though your translation is OK, your analysis is terrible.

h9003123a

劉家宇

l         Your analysis is terribly done. See this.

h9003124a

陳揆驩

l         Put considering in S+V.

l         You need to do partial translation every step of the way.

l         Intensive != 加強

h9003126a

張峻榮

l         I believe @Stake is the name of a company that reads “at stake”

l         The company = ?

l         Don’t give up so easily.

h9003127a

黃誌宇

l         Secure != 保住,See verb(3)

l         The sentence was not properly analyzed, although you seemed to get the meaning right.

h9003129a

吳子宇

Assignment missing

h9003131a

林志宭

Assignment missing

h9003134a

黃俊杰

l         This is a good sentence and, generally speaking, you did a good job. But I think you get the type wrong

l         Account != 概括

h9003135a

邱昇譽

l         Wrong S+V. This sentence has only one, not 3, S+V.

h9003136a

陳俊智

l         Wrong: 在它們(星星)的背後

l         Pick a more difficult sentence next time.

h9003137a

林又菁

l         I want hyperlink!

l         This sentence does not have an “A, B, and C” type of structure

l         Where did you get “優點”?

l         Ones = ?

l         Its = ?

l         Do partial translation along the way.

h9003139a

薛翎傑

l         No type of sentence?

l         You have problem with the following: for some time

l         Clauses should be analyzed separately

h9003140a

陳冠霖

l         Scanty analysis.

l         You have problem with the following: a large number of, several, supposedly, Malaysian

h9003143a

莊枚櫻

l         No source.

l         Convey != 警衛, cross into != 穿越了

h9003146a

顏嫻婷

l         No analysis at all. I will not deal with it unless you present an acceptable analysis.

h9003148a

朱唯良

l         As = ? seek = ?

h9003149a

林善治

l         Housing cockroaches in captivity = 飼養蟑螂

l         Secondly?

h9003153a

陳柏宏

Assignment missing

h9003154a

熊建川

l         Officially != 公開的

l         (that action …) should be analyzed separately. You did it completely wrong.

l         action != 事件

l         taken != 停止

h9003161a

黎新豪

Assignment missing

h9003165a

曾慧貞

l         Broken link

l         Your S+V is too long

l         Verb = is

l         uniforms, body armor, and other = A, B, and C

l         and the center's Maurice N = said …?

h9003167a

吳宗叡

l         Wrong verb: asked.

l         (that) it has asked …

l         software = ?

l         Not every sentence can be analyzed in a left-to-right fashion.

h9003168a

湯舒蓉

l         For the 2nd clause, S+V = you can get

l         For $100 more = 多花一百元

l         Media != 中小型

l         “or” links (music files to your audio system) or (still digital photos to the TV)

i8903097

柯家俊 *

l         No source. Can’t tell if your translation is correct.

i8903110

林倫永 *

l         Well done. Analysis is very thorough and mostly correct. Technically speaking, “assistant director …” and “a national laboratory..” are phrases, not clauses.

l         Envelope here means “limit”, see explanation (6) here.

l         Stanford Linear Accelerator Center =史丹佛線性加速中心?For instance, click here.

l         Director可譯為主任

l         U.S. Department of Energy =美國能源部,為專有名詞,不需要說部

l         Laboratory通常譯為實驗室

i9003002a

林家賢

Assignment missing

i9003004a

陳永欽

l         No analysis.

l         是誰對誰讓步?

i9003017b

王舜生

l         You asked a wrong question: “是什麼時候的戰爭呢

i9003020b

龔奕瑋

l         Recent international arrests and U.S. legislation are cause for concern throughout the Indian software industry, [which is interpreting such incidents as a sign of fear among other nations (that Indian engineers are encroaching on their job markets).]
Rephrase it into 3 sentences:
1) Recent international arrests and U.S. legislation are cause for concern throughout the Indian software industry.
2) Indian software industry is interpreting such incidents as a sign of fear among other nations.
3) The fear among other nations is that Indian engineers are encroaching on their job markets.

l         You should try to make your subject shorter.

l         Arrest = 逮捕,legislation = 立法,concern = 擔心,Indian = 印度的

i9003022a

郭斳A

l         I want hyperlink

l         Break!=斷絕,from沒有譯出

l         Verb = limited, not awards

l         And is used to link “medical staff” and “people …”

i9003024a

張竣傑

l         No source.

l         Questionable or missing translations: can, certainly, ability, analysis

l         Is it “direct” or “directly” reading?

i9003033b

楊宜昕

Assignment missing

i9003045b

黃博源

l         Allowing … != 子句

l         Which != DVD-RAM format

i9003066a

張露介

l         Popularity != 聲望,應為受歡迎的程度

l         what's useful on the Web != 在網路上最有用的

i9003084a

黃資燕

l         shown in part(a) = (a)圖所示。It is misplaced.

l         Wrong: "examples of both are shown", "both" is an adjective

i9003090a

陳建安

l         You have a big problem with vocabulary and grammar! You have to do the analysis VERY SLOWLY.

l         Project = 計劃

l         Feature != 號召, Look up the word "feature", item 7

l         排除 (" buffer overflow "電腦病毒的威脅)攻擊or排除威脅

l         which != 電腦病毒

l         bane != 安全的控制

i9003094a

簡伯松

Assignment missing

i9003170a

黃俊毓

l         Your S+V is too long.

l         Firms != 強硬的

l         Iran != 伊拉克

j880332n

邱重嘉

l         Structural analysis is OK.

l         Along with = ?

j890340n

周正泰

l         Structural analysis is OK.

l         Mirror site = 分站?

l         Override = ?

j9003003b

孫仁翔

l         OK

l         Try something more challenging next time.

j9003005b

羅鴻智 *

l         No source

l         Simple sentence

l         Fairest = ?

j9003006b

陳再興

Assignment missing

j9003007b

吳泓軒 *

l         The clause “who …” goes all the way to the end of the sentence.

l         Did you copy the translation done by others and pass it off as your own? If so, you are plagiarizing.

j9003013b

施明妤 *

l         I see you tried hard on your vocabulary, but you missed this one: license != 允許

l         “For use” is an inseparable prepositional phrase.

j9003014b

吳柏毅

Assignment missing

j9003016b

顏伯晉

l         OK

j9003018b

賴威宇

l         You should analyze the clause separately in detail.

j9003019b

江坤霖 *

l         Strictly speaking, this is a compound-complex sentence. It has 2 independent clauses and 2 dependent clauses.

l         when discussion turns to Intel !=當商議要回到 Intel

l         drop appearance != 露出失望

l         the future of the industry != 他們未來的產業

j9003022b

陳世豪 *

l         This is a compound-complex sentence.

l         The seal is close to (where (the investigators believe) a chunk of foam insulation hit during liftoff), and ( (the impact have broken or weakened the seal)  and (all or part of it floated away from Columbia during its second day in orbit).)

l         Paraphrasing:
1) The seal is close to a place.
2) A chunk of foam insulation hit this place (=which) during liftoff
3) The investigators believe that (2) is true
4) The impact have broken or weakened the seal
5) All or part of the seal (=it) floated away from Columbia during its second day in orbit.

l         You made a decent attempt on a challenging sentence. Keep trying and you will get better in time.

j9003030b

陳伯其

l         The original sentence you included in incomplete.

j9003031b

王之浩

l         OK

l         Tell me where you get your sentence again?

j9003034b

丁兆儀

Assignment missing

j9003035b

蔡聰明 *

l         You have to be specific on the source of the sentence. CNN TV or cnn.com?

l         I want partial translation along the way.

l         Incomplete sentence and analysis.

j9003038b

曾建凱

l         Very good

l         Work with = 與…合作

j9003039b

李泳賜

Assignment missing

j9003047b

蔡宗穎

l         You have to be specific on the source of the sentence.

l         This sentence seems incomplete.

j9003048b

林鶴展

l         No source.

l         Your sentence is too simple.

j9003049b

邱茂森 *

l         Of the terrain = ?

j9003050b

郭威章

l         Your sentence is too simple.

l         Did you copy the translation done by others and pass it off as your own? If so, you are plagiarizing.

j9003058b

林敬凱

l         This is a compound-complex sentence. There are two independent clauses separated by a comma.

j9003804b

蔡維謙

l         OK

j9103024b

彭智益

Assignment missing

j9103077b

林華彥

Assignment missing

j9103101b

葉國勤

Assignment missing