Comments for Assignment 5

Student ID

Name

Comments

h8706831

陳章展

l         You have problem with breaking up words into groups at the right places. Start by doing it REALLY slow.

h8803101

郭景銘

l         Border-free != 無邊無界

l         Architecture = ?

l         Deter = ?

l         but an international e-commerce architecture (that shields the rights of retailers or shoppers and deters digital piracy) has not been established, despite years of negotiations

h8803108

高健庭

Assignment missing

h880346n

李慶璋

Assignment missing

h8803820

李育修 *

l         This is a good sentence, but NOT a simple sentence.

l         PARC plans to develop a "privacy appliance"  { that would help blunt some of those concerns by making it harder for intelligence agencies and other government users  [ to get personally identifiable information (--names, addresses, or Social Security numbers, for example-- ) from such databases, or even to narrow queries in such a way that only a handful of people meet certain criteria. ] }

h8903002

葉子由 *

l         S+V OK

l         This sentence is somewhat problematic. I’ll take it as a good example of how unreliable English sentences found on Internet can be.

l         Literature review = ? Check here (1).

h8903804

王政陽

l         OK, except “program” != 程式

h8906106

吳柏熙

l         Your analysis is off. Please see here

h8906110

洪慶瑞

l         OK.

h9003003a

李紹唐

l         border != 邊緣

l         in a bid = ?

h9003007a

粘宸皓

Assignment missing

h9003009a

秦壽崙

l         Where did get this one? Are you plagiarizing?

h9003011a

黃怡禎

l         OK, except men = ?

h9003019a

施義欽

l         Quite good.

h9003021a

林群興

l         contribute !=有助于

l         DVR !=數位攝影機

h9003023a

蔡明勳

l         禮拜一is misplaced.

h9003027a

翁宏銘 *

l         Very good.

l         The subject of “triggered” is manufacturers.

h9003029a

蕭匡宭

l         and” links “become” and “change”.

l         Only = check here (8)

h9003043a

高誌維

l         Inhibition != 所能

l         Direct quotation is not part of that-clause.

h9003045a

黃淑文

l         Do something IT-related next time.

h9003047a

買大誠

l         conducting electricity = 導電

l         Do something more challenging next time.

h9003049a

郭豐碩

l         因為果!Due to = ?

h9003051a

潘嘉琳

l         Not too bad.

l         To emerge != 的出現

l         molecular machine != 分子加工

h9003055a

沈政達

l         S = several

l         Rousing = ?

h9003065a

林志倫

Assignment missing

h9003073a

郭嘉文

Assignment missing

h9003077a

陳嘉祥

l         OK

h9003085a

尤俊詠

Assignment missing

h9003087a

柯厚丞

l         Please see here

h9003091a

陳昱政

l         What does “using the search engine” modify, “locate” or “forms”?

l         Victim = ?

l         Submit != 提交

h9003093a

周俊宏

l         Conditioners  = 訓練者?

l         with their strong cooling != 堅定冷靜的決心下

l         virus = ?

h9003095a

吳文強

l         What does “for coping with the heightened SARS situation” modify?

l         Measure = ?

l         You are still doing the analysis too fast. Add more steps.

h9003097a

黃慕生

Assignment missing

h9003099a

蘇家展

l         Poorly done.

l         You overestimated your ability to analyze complicated sentences. Do it slowly next.

h9003101a

陳俊翰

Assignment missing

h9003105a

徐于三

l         OK

h9003115a

林上欽 *

l         elections being electronically tabulated != 變的電子操縱地平面

l         collecting vote != 聚集投票

l         You need to try harder.

h9003122a

許佑民

l         Type of sentence?

l         Do something more challenging next time.

h9003123a

劉家宇

Assignment missing

h9003124a

陳揆驩

l         Come under fire = ?

l         You said “絕得自己很多單字部分還要加強,尤其是在資訊方面的專業術語還要繼續加強”. You know what? I think you didn’t try hard enough.

h9003126a

張峻榮

l         straight from the factory = ?

l         genuine = ?

h9003127a

黃誌宇

Assignment missing

h9003129a

吳子宇

Assignment missing

h9003131a

林志宭

l         The prepositions “in”, “with”, and “by” are misplaced. Prepositional phrases are inseparable.

l         Overwhelmed = ?

h9003134a

黃俊杰

l         Here it the original sentence with trouble spots marked in red:
The nonprofit Honeynet Project, (the
brainchild of computer security expert Lance Spitzner), has spent the last four years studying hackers and the intrusion methods ((that) they use) by allowing them to break into honeypots — (systems intentionally designed to be compromised)

l         When you have problems analyzing a sentence, make sure you do it even more carefully and slowly than usual. However, I think you are quite close to getting it.

l         Be more specific as to what are the words that are in doubt.

h9003135a

邱昇譽

l         US sources = 美國消息來源

l         Effectively = ? Check here (2).

h9003136a

陳俊智

l         OK. Get something harder next time.

h9003137a

林又菁

l         OK.

h9003139a

薛翎傑 *

l         Brilliant = ?

l         “superb 3D graphics engine, ambience and characters” = A, B and C

l         develop = ?

h9003140a

陳冠霖

l         What are you trying to do?

h9003143a

莊枚櫻

l         Wrong S+V

l         90,000 cancer deaths = 90,000個死於癌症的病例

l         study = ?

h9003146a

顏嫻婷

Assignment missing

h9003148a

朱唯良

l         Don’t do simple sentence like this next time.

h9003149a

林善治

l         Lid = ?

l         Why are you so interested in cockroaches?

h9003153a

陳柏宏

l         On demand = ?

l         Unmatched = ?

l         Badly done. You need to do it slowly.

h9003154a

熊建川

l         Congratulations. You have made an unbelievably large number of mistakes in a short sentence.

h9003161a

黎新豪

l         OK except a multitude of other anxieties stirred by world tensions and risks.”

h9003165a

曾慧貞

Assignment missing

h9003167a

吳宗叡

l         Fine = ?

l         spam = unsolicited commercial e-mail

h9003168a

湯舒蓉 *

l         Collective = ?

l         Solid = ?

l         barely是否就是反向意思? The answer is yes.

l         Make a dent = 造成影響

i8903097

柯家俊

l         dedicated to worldwide agreement on international standards != 在國際標準上致力於全世界的協定。“on international standards” modifies “agreement”

l         You need to work harder.

i8903110

林倫永 *

l         Quite good.

l         Open up != 開發

i9003002a

林家賢

Assignment missing

i9003004a

陳永欽 *

l         A good sentence.

l         Your analysis starts to fall apart at step 5.

l         Which = investigation

l         Law enforcement = 執法單位,如檢調警

l         Work此處應為成果所為

i9003017b

王舜生

l         Poorly done.

l         Ready = ?

l         With whom = ?

i9003020b

龔奕瑋 *

l         Lost = ?

l         Against = ?

l         Firms = ?

l         “Streamcast Grokster” are company names

l         liable = ?

l         You picked a sentence that requires legal background. I’ll do it in class.

i9003022a

*

l         Cadre = core team

l         “Opposing” modifies petition

l         “they fear” 最後加入

l         that = patent system

l         You picked a good sentence but did a lousy job on it. I’ll do it in class.

i9003024a

張竣傑

l         What is a “simplex sentence”?

i9003033b

楊宜昕 *

l         You get the sentence COMPLETELY wrong.

i9003045b

黃博源

l         Which word is more important in “human cells”?

l         molecule-sized = 分子大小的

i9003066a

張露介

l         Do a sentence with more challenging structure next time.

i9003084a

黃資燕 *

l         A good sentence and a good job, too.

l         Check the best explanation of key here (verb (3) or (6))

i9003090a

陳建安

Assignment missing

i9003094a

簡伯松

Assignment missing

i9003170a

黃俊毓 *

l         S+V = ?

l         “To customer” is an inseparable prepositional phrase.

l         Through = ?

l         As a special promotional offer = 做為一種促銷

j880332n

邱重嘉

l         Your analysis is completely wrong.

j890340n

周正泰

Assignment missing

j9003003b

孫仁翔

l         You should NOT pick your sentence from Studio Classroom.

j9003005b

羅鴻智

l         Your analysis is completely wrong.

j9003006b

陳再興

l         OK, except that “to” is not part of “has found to

j9003007b

吳泓軒

l         put the game out of reach = ?

l         13th consecutive playoff series win != 連續第13次贏得季後勝利

j9003013b

施明妤

l         OK. I believe you can move on to something more challenging.

j9003014b

吳柏毅

Assignment missing

j9003016b

顏伯晉

l         Very good, although I am not sure if “conservation” should be translated as 存活率.

j9003018b

賴威宇

l         Very badly done. I didn’t see any analysis in your assignment.

j9003019b

江坤霖

l         Analyze the which-clause more carefully

j9003022b

陳世豪

l         Since != 因為如果, since = 自從…以來

j9003030b

陳伯其

l         Wrong S+V

l         That = ?

l         USS = United States Ship

j9003031b

王之浩

l         你太混了吧。

j9003034b

丁兆儀

l         OK. Do something related to IT next time.

j9003035b

蔡聰明

l         lingua franca = ? Click here

l         You need to work harder.

j9003038b

曾建凱

l         Pretty good.

j9003039b

李泳賜

l         太混了吧。

j9003047b

蔡宗穎 *

l         This is a good sentence but very badly done.

j9003048b

林鶴展 *

l         Wrong S+V.

l         Too mush = ?

l         Hunt or hurt?

l         This is a good sentence but very badly done.

j9003049b

邱茂森

l         OK.

j9003050b

郭威章 *

l         London is where this news article comes from. The rest of analysis is OK.

j9003058b

林敬凱

l         ousted regime != 奪取政權

l         S+V = military said

j9003804b

蔡維謙

l         supply-chain = ?

l         troop = ?

j9103024b

彭智益

Assignment missing

j9103077b

林華彥

Assignment missing

j9103101b

葉國勤

Assignment missing