Comments for Assignment 4

Student IDPhoto Asmt 4Cmt
9103028A my photo 廖富民
asmt 4
Instructor's comments
  • The selected "sentence" is not a grammatically correct sentence -- it has no independent clause.
  • 9103033A my photo 李金軒
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9103105A my photo 鄭昇祐
    asmt 4
    Instructor's comments
  • OK,但既然是線上購買,video就不該譯為錄影了吧。
  • 9103807A my photo 許佳翔
    asmt 4
    Instructor's comments
  • 3 clauses, not 4.
  • wrong S+V. You don't seem to be comfortable with the recommended analysis technique. who = ?
  • in light of recognition = 由於有了這項認識
  • Please redo the sentence.
  • 9103820A my photo 鄭永盛
    asmt 4
    Instructor's comments
  • in different languages != 在不同的語言,應為用(或以)不同的語言
  • application = 應用軟體
  • known as Lecture Translation != 以課堂翻譯著名,應為叫做課堂翻譯
  • 9103905A my photo 黃景南
    asmt 4
    Instructor's comments
  • 曾開發?
  • 轉變成聲音?
  • 請參考 http://freefall.csie.isu.edu.tw/~ielit05f/comments/n9303144A-assignment3.htm
  • 9220104A my photo 陳鼎琪
    asmt 4
    Instructor's comments
  • 展示?
  • 請參照 http://freefall.csie.isu.edu.tw/~ielit05f/comments/n9103820A-assignment4.htm
  • 9303005A my photo 丁柏瑋
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9303023A my photo 黃彥智
    asmt 4
    Instructor's comments
  • ***
  • requiring one to have an overall understanding of the network != 要求一個全部的理解網路,應為要求一個人要對網路有全盤的了解
  • that != research,應是研究得到的發現
  • 9303025A my photo 謝靜誼
    asmt 4
    Instructor's comments
  • ***
  • 注意省略的that
  • disorder != 混亂,應為疾病
  • 9303029A my photo 葉嘉宏
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9303036A my photo 邱俊原
    asmt 4
    Instructor's comments
  • in light of = ? 請參照 http://freefall.csie.isu.edu.tw/~ielit05f/comments/n9103807A-assignment4.htm
  • 9303080A my photo 彭俊傑
    asmt 4
    Instructor's comments
  • Only 1 clause?
  • Intellectual property != 高智能,應為智慧財產
  • regarded != 被重視的,應為視為
  • 9303093A my photo 蕭郁樺
    asmt 4
    Instructor's comments
  • ***
  • wrong link
  • The Redmond-based software behemoth != 位於Redmond總部的軟體巨人,應為總部位於Redmond的軟體巨人。如果你字加的慢一點就可能不會錯了
  • an array of free consumer services != 消費者免費服務的數組,應為一堆免費的消費者服務
  • 9303098A my photo 吳宗德
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9303104A my photo 王昱翔
    asmt 4
    0
    9303126A my photo 李昂憲
    asmt 4
    Instructor's comments
  • incorrect clause 2
  • self-defining = 安全的規定?
  • 9303144A my photo 胡書嫻
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9403003A my photo 吳宗翰
    asmt 4
    0
    12/5/2

    12 / 5 / 2 Updated: Wed Jan 4 11:26:28 CST 2006