Comments for Assignment 5

Student IDPhoto Asmt 5Cmt
9103028A my photo 廖富民
asmt 5
Instructor's comments
  • There is no main verb in this sentence.
  • 9103033A my photo 李金軒
    asmt 5
    Instructor's comments
  • It is a simple sentence.
  • major players !=重要人物,應為"重要公司"
  • 9103105A my photo 鄭昇祐
    asmt 5
    Instructor's comments
  • Your analysis is too short and contains mistakes. Redo it.
  • 9103807A my photo 許佳翔
    asmt 5
    Instructor's comments
  • wrong S+V
  • Redo the analysis.
  • 9103820A my photo 鄭永盛
    asmt 5
    Instructor's comments
  • Good sentence, but you made a few mistakes in your analysis. Please redo it.
  • blur is a verb.
  • 9103905A my photo 黃景南
    asmt 5
    Instructor's comments
  • sentient = ?
  • Your clause 1 is not a clause, it is a phrase.
  • 滿足結構 or 滿足限制?
  • that != device
  • 9220104A my photo 陳鼎琪
    asmt 5
    Instructor's comments
  • Good sentence.
  • CSS is a technical acronym. You don't have to translate it.
  • play back = 播放
  • 9303005A my photo 丁柏瑋
    asmt 5
    TBD
    9303023A my photo 黃彥智
    asmt 5
    TBD
    9303025A my photo 謝靜誼
    asmt 5
    Instructor's comments
  • "predicting ... " is not a clause itself, it is a phrase containing a that-clause.
  • Translation OK.
  • 9303029A my photo 葉嘉宏
    asmt 5
    TBD
    9303036A my photo 邱俊原
    asmt 5
    Instructor's comments
  • millions of CDs !=數以萬計的光碟
  • Wrong S+V in clause 3.
  • 9303080A my photo 彭俊傑
    asmt 5
    Instructor's comments
  • over 19 billion != 超過十兆,應為一百九十億
  • for building profiles !=為了建構檔案資料
  • Which word is the most important in "concealed weapons permits", and which words did you add first?
  • 9303093A my photo 蕭郁樺
    asmt 5
    Instructor's comments
  • Good sentece; a few mistakes, though.
  • is plagued !=被造成麻煩,應為"為...所困擾"
  • competing versions !=只能選擇單一版本,應為"多種競爭中的版本"
  • as its popularity grows !=如同它的使用人口數般成長的,應為"當它被人喜愛的程度日漸增加時"
  • 9303098A my photo 吳宗德
    asmt 5
    Instructor's comments
  • Wrong S+V
  • 9303104A my photo 王昱翔
    asmt 5
    0
    9303126A my photo 李昂憲
    asmt 5
    Instructor's comments
  • Good sentence, but quite a few mistakes in your analysis!
  • brain != 電腦
  • The word used in "form", a verb, not "from"
  • approach != 入口
  • which != A.I.
  • the structure and function of living brains !=這個結構和使用中電腦的函數
  • Did you try other possible ways to analyze this problem? You should, because this is how you advance your English to the next level.
  • 9303144A my photo 胡書嫻
    asmt 5
    Instructor's comments
  • Good sentence, but you made a few mistakes in analyzing it. Please redo it.
  • patterns !=典型
  • integrated circuit != 完整電路
  • You lost "in which", an important parts linking fragments of the sentence.
  • 9403003A my photo 吳宗翰
    asmt 5
    0
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    14 / 3 / 2 Updated: Wed Jan 4 11:26:29 CST 2006