Comments for Assignment 4

Student IDPhoto Asmt 4Cmt
9003911A my photo 李建樟
asmt 4
TBD
9103020B my photo 黃憶琳
asmt 4
TBD
9103030B my photo 王靜美
asmt 4
Instructor's comments
  • promising未翻出來
  • will not be available until after 2010 !=在2010年後不是可利用的,應為到2010年後才買的到。
  • 9103036B my photo 許佳豪
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9103050B my photo 葉力綸
    asmt 4
    0
    9103051B my photo 程晨
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9103080B my photo 葉書麟
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9103087B my photo 林家名
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9103096B my photo 邱永信
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9103106B my photo 林奕璋
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9103124A my photo 張瓊文
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9103804B my photo 陳淑萍
    asmt 4
    Instructor's comments
  • sentence well picked
  • as != 來作為,應為隨著(三件事的發生:the boundaries blur, the penetration deepens, and content is generated)
  • 9103810B my photo 羅育仁
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9120012B my photo 劉羽
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9203060B my photo 吳振彰
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9303001B my photo 陳碩彥
    asmt 4
    Instructor's comments
  • Nothing to comment about.
  • 9303002B my photo 謝志昂
    asmt 4
    Instructor's comments
  • video is a noun, latest is an adjective
  • No analysis.
  • Your translation doesn't sound like Chinese at all.
  • 9303003B my photo 許維軒
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9303006B my photo 王耀德
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9303007B my photo 李祐承
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9303008B my photo 簡谷勳
    asmt 4
    Instructor's comments
  • You did a good job translating the sentence, except for one thing: video-capable iPod music player != iPod音樂播放器影像播放功能,應為具影像播放功能的iPod音樂播放器
  • 9303009B my photo 黃耀賢
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9303011B my photo 吳永祥
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9303012B my photo 吳文彬
    asmt 4
    Instructor's comments
  • interesting little sentence, nicely picked
  • underestimating != 估計不足,應為低估
  • what Microsoft is doing with search technology != 微軟正在做搜尋技術這件事,應為微軟正在搜尋技術上做了什麼事。
  • 9303013B my photo 周易賞
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9303014B my photo 范中陵
    asmt 4
    Instructor's comments
  • This is a simple sentence, thanks is not a verb here
  • wrong verb in S+V
  • thanks to = due to,歸功於
  • Where did you get "程式計算記憶體"?
  • 9303016B my photo 吳建億
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9303017B my photo 周嘉菁
    asmt 4
    Instructor's comments
  • interesting sentence. At the top level, it is a complex sentence where the independent clause contains another noun clause (that...). This noun clause is itself a compound sentence.
  • S+V in your clause 2 is incorrect, but you managed to get the whole thing right. Please study my analysis below to get the correct way to do it.
  • without detection != 沒有偵查也行,應為而不被查覺
  • do not encrypt != 無法將…..譯成密碼,應為沒有將...加密
  • 9303019B my photo 林啟銘
    asmt 4
    Instructor's comments
  • real-time = 即時
  • You didn't seem to understand the sentence.
  • Please study my comments and then redo the sentence.
  • 9303021B my photo 蘇建彰
    asmt 4
    Instructor's comments
  • at home = ?
  • Pick one sentence only for your weekly assignment.
  • 9303024B my photo 王逸婷
    asmt 4
    Instructor's comments
  • OK, except that your clause 3 is not a clause.
  • 9303025B my photo 吳建興
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9303028B my photo 林雍舜
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9303029B my photo 吳建誠
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9303030B my photo 周如貫
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9303032B my photo 陳聖彰
    asmt 4
    Instructor's comments
  • to deliver不是限定動詞
  • drive為名詞,非動詞
  • 9303033B my photo 王首富
    asmt 4
    Instructor's comments
  • are collaborating with immunologists at the University of the West of England in Bristol != 與免疫學者合作在大學在英國西邊在布里斯托爾,應為與位在布里斯托爾的西英國格蘭大學的免疫學者合作
  • 9303038B my photo 林偉淳
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9303040B my photo 黃宥壬
    asmt 4
    Instructor's comments
  • Interesting sentence. It actually has 5 finite verbs, but I choose to break it up into 3 pieces in my analysis below.
  • downplay != 低估,應為將...輕描淡寫,或低調處理
  • call != 電話,此處為動詞
  • where did you get 實施?
  • 9303043B my photo 李昊壅
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9303045B my photo 陳季茂
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9303047B my photo 宋沐祥
    asmt 4
    0
    9303049B my photo 吳三奇
    asmt 4
    Instructor's comments
  • Nothing to comment about.
  • 9303050B my photo 黃政威
    asmt 4
    Instructor's comments
  • recognize != 認識,此處為賞識、表彰
  • Try something more challenging next time.
  • 9303055B my photo 趙偉至
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9303059B my photo 張卓強
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9303060B my photo 鄭富謙
    asmt 4
    Instructor's comments
  • Please do a more detailed, step-by-step analysis.
  • 9303061B my photo 黃詠棠
    asmt 4
    Instructor's comments
  • since != 從,應為因為
  • generate != 發展,應為產生、寫出。(RFI似為request for information的縮寫)
  • enhenced != 更大的,應為功能更強的
  • 9303066B my photo 曾祥俊
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9303069B my photo 賴政宏
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9303803B my photo 趙子凡
    asmt 4
    0
    9303807A my photo 黃彥夫
    asmt 4
    TBD
    9303822A my photo 李柏瑋
    asmt 4
    0
    9403008B my photo 郭文豪
    asmt 4
    TBD
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    18 / 32 / 4 Updated: Wed Jan 4 11:27:46 CST 2006